Saturday, September 4, 2010

Mini Character Profiles and a Contest

Today it's pouring rain and soccer season is over (which means no longer zooming around for my kids three back-to-back soccer games - yay!) and I have a lazy Saturday planned of playing a few board games with the kids and doing some character profiles for my WIP. Oh - and I just realised I'd better go shopping and buy Pete something for Father's day tomorrow. The kids want to get him Dr Who boxed sets...b/c they want Dr Who box sets. They are so subtle :)

Anyway...

Mini Character Profiles

Author Kara Mustafa sent me the mini profiles she uses - which are perfect - not too intense that it'll give me a headache and enough that I can feel out my characters and get a sense of their motivations, etc. Here it is:

Name:
Age:
Best friend:
Best memory:
Favorite food:
Favorite subject in school:
Post-school dream:
Hobbies:
What they'd do in an ethical dilemma:
Best qualities:
Worst qualities:



Kara's Aussie character, Logan
aka Jesse Spencer
(from her novel Plan B)

Also, earlier, YA Highway had a Road Trip with the prompt: What does your character hide in their underwear drawer - or other secret location? Which I'm going to add. Kara did hers and it completely rocks - so telling about her characters and really fun.


I have a few characters I'm going to do it for:
Cara - my MC
Ashleigh - MC's best friend
Seb - the boyfriend
Ben - good mate
Flint - Ashleigh's big bro


Anyone else use character profiles?
Any tips for me? :)


So - the contest isn't here @ inkcrush - it's over @ Kara's blog and includes gift vouchers and The DUFF and Break and Personal Demons and more... And it's also one of my favourite blogs for general awesomeness and inspiration.

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

RTW - Best book of the month

I read some really good books this month (and a few were duds, at least for me, haha):

August reading looked like this (in the order I read them):
The Iron King - Julie Kagawa
Fire - Kristin Cashore
The Summer of Skinny Dipping - Amanda Howells
And the Everything Unravelled - Jennifer Sturman  My Review
Siren - Tricia Rayburn
Swerve - Phillip Gwyne
Joel and Kat Set the Story Straight - Nick Earls and Rebecca Sparrow  My Review
Raw Blue - Kirsty Eagar  My Review
Beatle Meets Destiny - Gabrielle Williams  My Review
How Not To Be Popular - Jennifer Ziegler
The Naughty List - Suzanne Young
The Hand That First held Mine - Maggie O'Farrell
Winter Longing - Tricia Mills
Catching Fire - Suzanne Collins (re-read)
Mockingjay - Suzanne Collins
Caleb and Kate - Cindy Martinusen-Coloma
Saltwater Vampires - Kirsty Eagar

Four of the above books weren't really my thing (and get one or two stars from me)...

Only one adult fiction this month (my YA TBR pile is huge right now) but Maggie O'Farrell's book was stunning as I expected it to be :)

The rest of them were great reads. Including two paranormals - which I don't normally read. (Penguin Australia sent me Siren and after reading Kirsty Eagar's debut, I had to read her newly released vampire thriller - and, it rocks :).

My fave read of the month?

Two have entered my favourite books of all time list. Yay! Both are Australian - you can probably guess if you've been around here a while.

Raw Blue by Kirsty Eagar - because it just resonated with me so deeply and made me ache and feel all kinds of emotions. And it's also inspired me to go deeper in my own writing and not be afraid to pour my heart and soul onto the page. Also, the dialogue, hey? And it's just a stunning, mesmerising book. I love it so much. Sigh...

And

Beatle Meets Destiny by Gabrielle Williams - which is so completely awesome that just thinking about it blows my mind. It's a cult classic and I wish I could shout out from the rooftops and tell the world to read this book.

What was the best book you read this month?



Oh - and sorry for the post overload - but so many awards to announce and then RTW... :) And, had to do this while it's still Wednesday here, haha (It's 11pm). Just had a lovely Thai feast with our extended family (an early Father's Day) and am about to settle back into reading (Jarvis 24 - whoo hoo!) so, good night all :)

xx

Oh - and you can join in in Road Trip Wednesday by linking up with YA Highway - and check out everyone else's favourite reads this month.

The Inky's - Inside a Dog

Everything you need to know about The Inky's


The inky's are Australia's only teenage choice book award.






There are two inky's awarded every year:
The Golden Inky goes to the #1 Australian YA title of the year.
The Silver Inky goes to the #1 International title of the year.




Previous winners:
2009
Golden Inky: Randa Abdel-Fattah - Where the Streets Had A Name
Silver Inky: The Hunger Games - Suzanne Collins


2008
Golden Inky: James Roy (teen author) - Town
Silver Inky: Before I Die - Jenny Downham


2007 
Golden Inky: Simmone Howell - Notes From the Teenage Underground
Silver Inky: Looking For Alaska - John Green


The long list for 2010 has just been announced @ The Melbourne Writer's Festival :)
The Gold Inky (for an Australian book)


My faves (for the short list) are: The Piper's Son, Loving Richard Feynman, Stolen, Swerve and Raw Blue (haven't read Merrow yet...).
My absolute fave for the winner is RAW BLUE by Kirsty Eagar (I was so pumped to see Raw Blue on there - yay!)

The Silver Inky (for an international book)

Me? I've only read half this list and I'm going for The Sky is Everywhere by Jandy Nelson :)

The long list of ten Aussie YA title's and ten international YA titles are whittled down to a short-list of  5 Aussie and 5 international (through a panel of judges which include authors and teen readers).

On October 12 voting will open and teens (between 12 & 20) all over Australia can vote for their fave Aussie and fave international from the short-list.

Which books would you pick off the list to go through for voting?
Or who would you choose to take out the Golden and Silver 2010 inkys?

Tuesday, August 31, 2010

Queensland Premier's Literary Awards

I blogged a few weeks back with the five books that were short-listed for the YA category of the 2010 Queensland Premier's Literary Awards:


  • Phillip Gwyne -- Swerve (Penguin)
  • Justine Larbalestier -- Liar (Allen & Unwin)
  • Scott Westerfeld -- Leviathan (Simon Pulse)
  • Melina Marchetta -- The Piper's Son (Penguin)
  • Richard Yaxley -- Drink the Air (self-published)
I mentioned that I've read the top four and my favourite was The Piper's Son by Melina Marchetta, although all four titles were strong contenders and worthy. 

Well...

Da dum...

The winner was announced today:

Drink the Air by Richard Yaxley (self published)

I know (!) I was pretty amazed to see a self-pubbed title up there and to see it beat such outstanding YA titles is pretty huge. CONGRATS!  - surely it may now be picked up by a publisher? I searched the net and cant find an image or synopsis of his book, but I did find the first chapter on his blog (which only has one post on it from 2009, haha.). 

And it's a verse novel.

I adore verse novels! 

My fave verse authors are Steven Herrick, Margaret Wild, Catherine Bateson and Sonya Sones. I havent yet read Patricia McCormick or Lisa Schroeder but I've heard they're brilliant.

Anyone else read verse novels? 

Also, congrats to Melina Marchetta, Scott Westerfeld & Justine Larbalestier (husband and wife) and Phillip Gwyne for making the short-list. As a consolation, Justine Larbalestier won the YA section of the Davitt Awards with her novel Liar - winners were announced today :)


Feeling a little out of the loop hanging out in Coffs while the Melbourne Writers Festival is on. Steph @ My Girl Friday took notes on Melina Marchetta's session that she attended today. Some great stuff in there about The Piper's Son and jellicoe Road and just Marchetta awesomeness in general.


From Steph:Melina has a middle-grade book out shortly. It's called The Gorgon in the Gully and it centres around Danny Griggs (the little brother of Jonah from On The Jellicoe Road) and Melina assured us there be an appearance from Jonah himself. She also commented that it was a bit difficult writing such an innocent character, having been used to very sarcastic voices in her work.

Also, Jaclyn Moriarty and Lili Wilkinson and over 400 international authors are there and I so wish I was too...

xx


The Devil's Staircase - Helen Fitzgerald

Bronny, a young Australian, finds herself down and out in London. She's a sweet girl who has spent her teenage years in a fearful, cautious bubble.

She's never taken drugs, had sex or killed anyone.

Within six weeks she's done all three.

A group of backpackers (and Bronny) break into an abandoned London townhouse seeking a rent-free life of partying. They don't realise someone's already there: a terrified woman bound and gagged in the basement. (back cover blurb)

Anyone hooked on the blurb?


Chapter one opens with these two lines:

It was fifty-fifty. Mum had it and died in a pool of her own mad froth. <3

As the story opens, Bronny's in Melbourne, after her 18th birthday, being tested (and will find out if she has a death sentence disease) in hospital. By page ten, she's run away from her dad and sister, impulsively flown to London, met two guys, she's in a hostel, no money, no job... 


The pacing is insane - really, it's like being caught up in a tornado. It wowed me and sucked me in big time.


Don't you just love the feeling you get when you pick up a random book and it turns out to be truly awesome? I was only one chapter in when I started thinking, 'this is goooood.' and it just kept getting better.


Bronny is the most likeable of characters, although she starts out as naive and sheltered, she pretty much lets loose and her experiences are wild but also kinda cute.

Then, half way through, when Bronny's romance with a fellow squatter (squatee? haha) - of whom I very much approved - has just kicked up a notch... they make a gruesome discovery. One of Bronny's squatter friends just may be a serial killer...

And guys, it's set in London (who doesn't love books set in the UK?) 


Bronny on exploring London: "I suppose I'd formed an image of London in my eighteen years, mostly from An American Werewolf in London. I'd imagined scary underground tunnels, fog, grey skies, unhappy people and werewolves." (page 18) Isn't she the best of narrators?

I love the sentences, which were so readable and cracked me up - I often paused to re-read sentences a few times over. And I wrote a whole bunch of lines in my book of fave quotes.


I love how it's a wild but kinda sweet contemporary read, but then it turns thriller and it sounds crazy, but it works. 


What I love most is how I honestly had no idea what was going to happen next. 


The whole time there's mystery surrounding Bronny and what exactly happened to her mum, mystery surrounding her new backpacker buddies and then the mystery of the serial killer, which I didn't pick, but on the re-read I loved seeing all the clues and foreshadowing.

It's brilliantly original. I can't think of another YA to compare it too. It's been reviewed as black comedy. Confession: I didn't know I was into black comedy - if this is black comedy, bring it on! I thought it was clever and hilarious.


Some other professional reviews that sum the Devil's Staircase up better than me :) :


'Lovely, sparse, elegant writing, highly original plot and ever- building tension make this book irresistible.There's sex and drugs and rock-and-roll, a whiff of true evil and a scream-out loud finale. Wow!' AUSTRALIAN WOMEN'S WEEKLY


'Brilliant, shocking and unputdownable' SYDNEY MORNING HERALD


"deftly written, fast-paced, scary and well-plotted - and would seem ideally suited to becoming a film script." SUN HERALD

As A Writer:
  • So, it's in first person past. Occasionally switches to third person past (still from Bronnies POV). And in different parts of the book, it's third person from the POV of the serial killer and the kidnapped victim, ah, kidnappee? Anyway, Helen basically wrote it however she wanted and I am awe.
  • Pacing was wild - no need to skip a paragraph anywhere (not that I'm big on skipping paragraphs, heheheh ;) Each sentence was succinct and conveyed a page worth of meaning.
The Devil's Staircase is marketed as YA in Australia, but other countries may shelve it as Adult fic. Bronny has just turned 18, and the Love Interest is older, 23. And hot. Just saying :) So, a crossover book.


Anyway, I really found it refreshingly awesome and I raced through it and have read it twice. I don't see much suspense/thriller in the YA genre, and this was even cooler as it has the whole coming-of-age, adventure in a foreign country thing going on. And Jack the Ripper gets mentioned. Yeah, I know... very cool.


Do I recommend it? Absolutely. I seriously loved this book (enough to go out and read all her other books after). But only if you're into this type of book (by now you've probably gathered it's a bit wild and has a veeeery creepy serial killer. Plus, if you're a fan of dark humour. 


The Devil's staircase was also short-listed for the 2010 Davitt Awards - which award the best crime writing by Australian women.


And... she's got a YA title coming out in November 2010 (as I mentioned, ah, last week?):

Everything's going swimmingly at school for Rachel, until she finds a newborn baby in the cupboard....(from authors site) 
With an utterly original, hilarious, and honest voice, Helen Fitzgerald delivers a sexy new boarding school tale with true heart-and a surprise ending you won't forget. (teaser review)






AND NEWSFLASH:  Speaking of The Davitt Awards... Justine Larbalestier won the 2010 best crime fiction for YA with her novel Liar - winners were announced today. The Davitt Awards celebrate Australian women who write crime :)

Sunday, August 29, 2010

My art and writing and dreams and stuff

Once upon a time, I wanted to be an artist when I grew up (or an actress or an author).

I'm actually a primary school teacher and busy with my family (three kids: Sam, Reuben and Carissa).

I spent some time tinkering around drawing illustrations for a children's book I wrote but just really struggled with what I envisaged in my head and my ability (or lack of) to produce the same thing on paper. I ended up having a break from the kidlit scene and moving onto writing YA.

Now,  I'm struggling with with the same thing in my WIP - knowing what I want my story to be and the gap between my vision and the actual words. I am such a harsh critic of my own work that I wonder if I actually hinder myself ever getting anywhere because I often focus on my shortcomings and not on my progress or strengths. Does anyone else ever feel like this?

Also, I keep reading some of the best writing out there and comparing myself to the most gifted of illustrators and just deflating at my own floundering progress. And feeling like the reality of me getting published is not really a reality at all.

Other times though - brilliant writing and artwork inspires me to stop being so lazy and stretch my creativity muscles and really throw all I can into accomplishing things.

What are you like? Does brilliance inspire you or sometimes get you down? or both, depending?

So last night I was feeling a bit flat about everything and I pulled out some of my own work and instead of looking for flaws I just felt kinda proud that I can start with a blank piece of paper and change it in to something. The same with my first MS - to take a story out of nothing an breathe life into those characters is something that only I did. And no matter how lame and cringe-y some parts are - I think it's worth celebrating  that I gave it a go.

I'm so up and down with how I feel about writing and I don't even know what this post is about. Maybe about dreams and getting older and still feeling so far away from things I felt I'd do as an adult when I was a kid. And about me learning not to be so hard on myself but also learning how to push myself.

I guess I just wonder if anyone else gets hung up on the same things.

And I just want to say, hey, me too.

And I love the thought of all you guys out there giving it a go and even though some of you are on the other side of the globe, your blogs and emails and own accomplishments inspire me to push through and hold onto that little kid seed inside of me that believes that one day I might be an author or illustrator when I grow up :)

And, here's a pic I drew for a book (ahh, that I've since abandoned...but am thinking maybe it's worth giving it another go?) and yay for the end of winter here! Spring in two days!

A cropped shot of my winter pic in progress

Cropped Sections

The left side

The right side

Centre

Sorry for my slightly ramble-y post. Love you guys :)

Thursday, August 26, 2010

Amelia O'Donohue is So Not a Virgin - Trailer

I have an insane crush on the literary genius that is Helen Fitzgerald. Her novel The Devil's Staircase kept me up all night and I've re-read it (twice!) and studied her writerly brilliance and just love everything about it (my review for The Devil's Staircase coming soon).

So very super-pumped for her first YA novel - I've pre-ordered it (release date Nov 1).  Here's a tagline from her site:


Everything's going swimmingly at school for Rachel, until she finds a newborn baby in the cupboard.
With an utterly original, hilarious, and honest voice, Helen Fitzgerald delivers a sexy new boarding school tale with true heart-and a surprise ending you won't forget. (teaser review)

And the brand new trailer! (and it's Helen's daughter Anna and Anna's best friend doing the whispering in the trailer :)


Amelia O'Donohue Is SO Not A Virgin from Blether Video on Vimeo.

Helen Fitzgerald has four books out already (I've read them all this year).

Has anyone else read her? Because how amazing, brilliant, astounding, wickedly funny and whoah-wild-crazy is she?

I predict she's going to make a serious impression on the YA scene this November.

And, as the trailer said - she is the Queen of climaxes, twists and surprise endings that you don't see coming.

Oh - and kinda wiped out after finishing Mockingjay. Insanely powerful and darker than the first two and I'm still processing it all. And, I never posted my preference between Peeta and Gale before. So, just letting y'all know - I was and am Gale.Just, you know, FYI (and it's not cryptic or alluding to anything, just putting it out there). For a SPOILERY discussion: those of you who have read Mockingjay should absolutely check out this post. Love it! So funny even if you don't agree, haha :)

Anyways, havent visited many blogs (will get to it!) - just jumped on here after Helen posted her trailer b/c I'm kinda pumped.